January assessment feedback

1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).

WWW: 

• Some good ideas

EBI: 

• Don't apply media theories, but merely state them.
• give clear examples and evaluate using media terminology
• improve written English

2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Identify at least one potential point that you missed out on for each question in the assessment.

• conglomerate owner ship
• Maintain control and profit at every stage of chain of production (vertical int.)

3) On a scale of 1-10 (1 = low, 10 = high), how much revision and preparation did you do for this assessment?

1/10
4) Look at your answer for Question 1. Did you manage to write about three different strategies and three different benefits? It's vital you read the question and follow it exactly.

I did not write about write about 3 strategies.
5) Look at your answer for Question 2. Did you follow the question guidance and write about both the BBC and commercial broadcasters? What could you have added to this answer to reach a higher mark?

I wrote about public service broadcasting and talked about the digital age.
6) Now look over your mark, teacher comments and the mark scheme for Question 3 - the 20 mark essay question on media effects theory. Write a new paragraph for this question based on the suggested theories/answers in the mark scheme. Make sure it is an extensive, detailed paragraph focused on the question and offering examples from the wider media.